Over the holiday break, I finally put together the entire first cut of the film. All the scenes are now animated, and I'll be prodding some folks for feedback over the next few weeks. There is so much that I would like to go back to and tweak, so I need to know what parts really need some attention, and what parts aren't worth stressing about. I know that some festivals will not accept a film that has already been shown on the web, so unfortunately I'll only be able to show this edit in person. Thanks in advance for your feedback.